I stand here to keep people in,
Not to keep people out.
I stand here everyday
While people suffer.
As I stand here I see
Children, adults, elders suffer in these camps.
I see horrible beatings of innocent people.
I see people murdered because of they are Jews.
I see people forced into gas chambers,
And forced to work without food or water.
I feel that it is because of me and only me,
That these people are stuck inside.
During the Holocaust,
Ive seen around 1.1 million people suffer and die.
I stood there and watched,
All of these people suffered because of their religion.
1 comments:
This one is better because it uses more specifics and seems more emotional. The last three sentences are historically inaccurate though. Over 11 million people lost their lives during the Holocaust, and 7 of the 11 million were Jewish. The other 4 million were other "undesirables" in the Nazi mindset.
32/35 points for this one.
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